It is never easy to create a world – but this one and mainly the protagonist has way to many contradictions.To have 6+ persona all of whom has “life long “not believable – he is what 25, and have multiple personas that everyone knows and trust – if you know someone good, then you know them for at least 3 years – so that would be kind of hard (it goes deeper than this)– one moment 200 silver is more than the whole town make in a year, the next moment he give 2 silver as a tip to a stable boy – lets say this is a small town of 30 families = 200silver/30 persons =6,67 so basically he is giving away 6 month of pay to a child – and later on lodging for 14 days is 2 coppers .. so the stable boy could buy 1400 days of lodging (that is almost rent for 4 years) for his 2 silver… one of many logical flaws in the whole setup.Sorceress can harvest souls through complex spells an rituals, but no sorceress will work together – then how the hell did they learn this complex ritual?Out of space

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